Pretty good...
I personally like the the fade in, but the volume is randomly lowered at :29. It comes back in later on, and if this is supposed to be on purpose, it doesn't work. If it's just a mistake, then oh well. I also like the way you change up the quarter-note kicks, but it would be cool to not have quarter note kicks at all, but that's just my opinion. Still sounds good, though. But try to keep the song on the shorter side, because if you draw it out much it will get repetitive and suck. The song as it is now just doesn't have enough to keep it going for more than 2:30 minutes. But I could bet my pants that you will make this turn out great, so you can count on a future 5, download, and free publicity at my school from me.