Eh...
The sax souded a little off key in some parts, and it was a little...strong, especially for the mood of the music, just a tad overpowering. But I really liked melody, nevertheless. The hand clappers were annoying as hell though, didn't fit at all, completely random, but in a bad way. I don't know, I guess the instrument choice for the song kind of ruined it for me. It was a little boring, and the sounds just didn't seem to fit well with one another. I like the melody, but it would be a hell of a lot better with different sounds. I would have liked to hear more of a story also. It's just kind of flat the entire song, no real buildup or anything.
So, not your best, but O.K.
If you do anything more with the song, at least get rid of those damn hand clappers at the end.