I personaly hate the song. I usualy like your stuff, but this is free-form jazz in all it's glory. And I despise free-form jazz. But this will not help you. So, as a musical piece, it carried out it's duty quite well.
Its free-form jazz.
...Screw it. I can't say anything good about it because I don't like it. And I'm not going to blow smoke up your ass in an attempt to sound nice. So, I'll give you a 5 and a 9 for the time and effort, and say that as long as anyone like's what you do, then that's all that matters.
And people like me can just go and screw themselves.
P.S. On my willingness to colab with you, I forgot to give you my instant-messenger... code... thingy. email@example.com
And it would be cool if you would review my stuff. I need someone with ability to do such a thing ; ) <------(OMG!!!!!WINKING EMOTICON!!!!!!!)